ooops
let me know next time you come across
ooops
let me know next time you come across
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haha will do mate. end of the year if all goes to plan
Looks like you took them with this........ Just kidding very nice
Sold finally........
couple of quickies i took tonight...
got a panarama of perth too, gotta stitch it yet...
You have inspired me to venture out into the cold tonight and snap a few shots , Jolly good shots old bean.
Some constructive criticism
1-3, the lighting is wrong.
1st - Complex foreground takes the attention away from the car. Crop it down a bit. Also I'd reduce the yellow in the photo.
2nd - too much flash lighting in the foreground again, causing an imbalance in the photo.
3rd - I can see what you were trying to achieve. next time try from a lower angle, and zoom in a bit more, trying to cut out as much bright background light as possible.
4th - Good shot. Crop it, decrease the highlights a little, bit more contrast and black level.
5th - Bit more saturation, bit more black, bit more contrast.
Hope that helps mate. You're doing good.
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thanks heaps mate.
yeah they were all just spur of the moment things, as we were driving past was just like, oh yeah will take a photo there, and it was freezing so we didnt set up well, or try as much as i would have liked.
first 4 are very slightly editted, just a lil contrast and saturation (and at 1 in the mornin)
last is just as it was taken.
i will try mess around with the 4th, i like that one, we got a couple more at different angles.
gah i always forget, should have tried to make a hdr of the 4th one
will try
that was a good critique, Pauly - even to the level where I, as a layperson could understand.
Good shots still though Shay. To me 1&3 emote chic, though with warmth & a sense of familiarity (probably the Vec :P) 2 Has the contrast between the harsh blinding white and the black background with the warming ambers. 4 is probably my least favorite as it doesn't say anything to me except "here's a Vectra and BMW in a parking lot" Lastly, 5 could be interpreted as "the thin line of civilization floating in between the darkness of the abyss" (nah actually I tried too hard to get that interpretation, it looks like a city skyline which, fair enough, has been done a lot).
Anyway now you can contrast the uninformed critique of mine with the pro critique of Pauly and you'll be set. (nah actually just listen to pauly :P)
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